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Vultures by Luke Tarzian


by Luke Tarzian

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The bold may wisely cage a wolf that wields the power to raise an army, Behtréal thought, but it is the arrogant, the ignorant who reach between the bars to slay the wolf’s cubs.― 

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An enemy slain is not a conflict won…

After decades of war the demon Te Mirkvahíl is dead. But its progeny endure, spilling from the Heart of Mirkúr, sowing death across the land of Ariath. If the people are to finally know peace, the Heart must be destroyed. Theailys An believes he can do just that with The Keepers’ Wrath, an infamous power focus wrought in Ariath’s yesteryears–but the weapon first must be reforged.

War spares no one…

Serece never intended to get involved in Ariath’s war. But history and demons have a way of pulling strings. When she learns Theailys An, a man whom she abhors, bears striking similarity to the first creator of The Keepers’ Wrath, Serece departs her mountain world for Ariath to ascertain the truth.

From patience, hope…

For millennia Behtréal has walked the world alone. Rewriting history to resurrect his people is easier said than done. But Ariath holds the key–soon The Keepers’ Wrath will be remade.

Truth from madness…

As paths converge and a shadow falls across Ariath, one thing becomes increasingly and horrifyingly clear–these events have played out many times before.

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“This book was so interesting to read. It is full of chaos and it is a story of shadow versus light.”

Lisa’s Books, Gems, and Tarot

“But once I get into the story, I was immersed. The author has given me such a well-crafted tale that is surely not for the faint of heart.”

Lili’s Blissful Pages

“This is very much a multilayered book, there are multiple plots occurring across different times.  What I admire the most is Luke keeps the plot flowing smoothly and I never felt confused or lost, particularly at this is a world where balance and chaos are most important.  The characters we follow also embody this theme, for example Serece has a violent rage within her, believed to be evoked by a Goddess.  Thaeilys An has something akin to an Angel and a Devil on his shoulders, both rivaling to take over his head but the dark manifesting in such a way that he blacks out and has no memory of the carnage.”

The Swordsmith

“Vultures by Luke Tarzian is the first book in the fantasy series called Shadow Twins. This is quite a complicated book to explain, I think I would call it more epic fantasy without the length because there is just so much going on, a lot of characters and it can be a little bit much. To me, it kind of felt a little bit like Game of Thrones in its essence because of everything happening.”

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The Month of Jul, Mid Year 1169

Theailys An retched and the odour was almost as foul as that of the mangled corpse a few feet from where he knelt. A fantastic way to ring in his thirtieth year, to be sure. His younger self would have been surprised, horrified by the headless torso and the limbs strewn across the grass, by the gossamer threads of shadow leaking from the wounds—but that was then; this was now. Blackouts and mutilated bodies had become commonplace these last few years and it was hard to find shock in something so perversely routine.

Ignoring the carnage, Theailys stood and started through the moonlit trees. This has got to stop,he thought, though he knew the words held little weight. The breathing exercises his mother had taught him as a child did little to quell the murderous voice in his head, and his medication was as useful as a torch in rain. Had Theailys’ victims been human he was sure the Faithbringers would have locked him up ages ago. Keepers, sometimes he thecorpses had been, if only to validate his guilt.

He arrived at Helveden’s southern periphery gate. A cold sweat rose from his pores. Nearly two dozen corpses lay strewn across the road; blood stained the cobbles black in the dark of night. Theailys had never before seen this many after a blackout. He had never seenhuman bodiesafter a blackout.

What did you do? he hissed inwardly.

The voice in his head giggled, manifesting as a spindly white-eyed silhouette. It’d taken to calling itself Faro, a once common name made infamous four centuries prior by the wartime slaughter and treason of Faro Fatego. History told he too had seen shadows, had whispered to the voices in his head. Taking that into consideration it was an aptly appropriated name.

Answer me, Theailys growled as they walked in step.


Armored footsteps clanked his way. Theailys blinked, then found himself swarmed by half a dozen Faithbringers, collared by the tips of their crystalline longswords as Faro paced circles around them; the Faithbringers could not see him. Their blades were slick with blood and their white half-plate bore signs of conflict. Theailys sucked in a ragged breath, then exhaled.

“Did you call the lokyns here?” growled the lead Faithbringer.

“No.” Theailys stole a glance at Faro, who had taken to licking the Faithbringer’s cheeks. He took another breath to compose himself. “What reason would I have for doing so?”

“You tell me,” the Faithbringer said. His face twitched and Faro snickered. “The enemy are yourancient brethren.”

“Aren’t you an astute one?” Theailys crossed his arms. “Yes, my people are a lokyn sect, but we are no more the enemy than you are.” Then, stepping forward so the sword tip touched his throat and drew a dot of blood: “Recall it was the mirkúr-wielding humanFaro Fatego whom the enemy tasked to lead its brood, to whom our city nearly fell.”

The Faithbringer snarled. Theailys had touched a nerve, though not one tender enough to provoke assault, not that the Faithbringers actually had grounds, nor were they dense enough to severely maim the only man who could finally bring an end to the new lokyn war. The Faithbringer sheathed his dragon’s tooth of a blade, the others following his lead, then grabbed Theailys by the collar of his robes and shoved him toward the gate.

Theailys crossed the threshold, the southern farmlands stretching out before him, vast and gold, the late-night air imbued with an amalgamation of wet grass, rot, and death. As his blackouts had become commonplace so too had this perfume. It would remain as such so long as the lokyns ran amok.

You could reap the demon scum.. Keep their essence for your own,” Faro said. “The power of those blackened souls and the mirkúr they possess—

No,Theailys thought. Keepers only know what I do when you take control, but I refuse to reap while I’m awake, not until I have to at least. Not until I’m standing at the Heart of Mirkúr with The Keepers’ Wrath in hand.

Faro snickered. “Oh, my Flesh…”—Theailys hatedthe byname—“You amuse me so! You truly expect your little power focus to imbue you with the strength to reap the barrier that yet surrounds the Heart!

Considering the recreation of The Keepers’ Wrath has been my life these past five years, yes, I do,Theailys thought as they continued on. Pray tell, what do you find amusing about that?

History,” the white-eyed shadow said. “I sometimes read while you’re asleep.

Better than maiming,Theailys thought.

Debatable.” Faro grinned at Theailys. “My amusement though, dear Flesh, is in the irony of you taking up the very weapon Faro Fatego used to nearly bring your country to its knees.

The irony of this had not been lost on Theailys. In fact, it had nearly caused him to abandon the endeavor completely on several occasions. As far as Theailys was concerned the end of this war couldn’t come soon enough. With any luck, soon enough was perhaps three weeks away, four at the most.

He held his hand out to Faro. The grinning shadow took it gleefully and the two were made one as they entered Helveden proper, abuzz with the apprehensive merriment evoked by wartime fear and drink. Here the farmland stench dissolved, replaced by horse shit, piss, and bile. Theailys yawned, continuing up the oak-lined promenade, heading northeast toward the Hall of Illumurgists and sleep. He had gone perhaps half a mile when he heard his name.

A pale man in black Hall robes approached from the west. He carried a slip of parchment. “Mistress Khal and Queen Ahnil require your immediate presence at the Bastion,” he said, fingering the hour-old timestamp. “The, um…requisitions team has, um…returned.”

Theailys raised an eyebrow. He’d not been expecting them for another week. He yanked the summons from the man and scanned it hastily, groaning. The requisitions team had returned, indeed—as body parts in silken sacks.

The queen’s council sat sequestered in the Bastion’s war room. They’d convened an hour prior to Theailys’ arrival, but his tardiness was the least of their concerns.

“This is bad, to put it mildly,” Mistress Khal said. The Master Illumurgist sat parallel to Theailys, brow furrowed. “If word gets out about this people will call for blood and the generals may very well oblige them.”

“At which point we’ll have grossly smeared our covenant with the phantaxians,” Theailys said. “The…remains they sent us were a sign, a simple warning to respect the laws laid out on either side, not a declaration of war.”

“Yes, but do you really think a people festering in fear will see it like that?” Khal asked.

“Of course not,” Theailys scoffed. “Our country is historically, barbarically rash. Any non-human is a perceivable threat. The phantaxians were forcefully exiled from the enclaves because of a plague unique unto their race and the dissident are routinely beaten and hung. Just yesterday a childwas found strung up in the western farmlands. A child!”

Theailys stood to pace the room, hands clasped behind his back. “Regardless—” He heaved a sigh. “Regardless, this business sets completion of The Keepers’ Wrath even further behind schedule than it already is.”

“You have a thought, then, brother?” asked Searyn, Theailys’ twin sister and Faithbringer general.

Theailys offered the room a reluctant nod. “The conception of this weapon was my doing; I’m the only one who can wield it. I’ll fulfill the requisitions myself. Time is of the essence and we can ill afford offending the phantaxians again. I hold favor with their king; that should help to some degree.” He paused. “If my queen and council approve, of course.”

They did, unanimously.

“I’ll need three weeks, four at the most depending on how smoothly things go,” Theailys said to Searyn. Round trip, it was about a three-week undertaking, but it was necessary to have a bit of a cushion considering the state of things. “Will your forces be able to hold ground near the Heart?”

“It’s doable, though the quicker you are, the better. Our numbers are stretched thin as of late,” she admitted, grimacing. “Te Mirkvahíl is dead by my own blade, which makes things a bit easier, but recent reports suggest the rate at which the Heart of Mirkúr is spawning lokyns has increased tenfold.”

“These are substantiated by the frequency with which they slaughter villages in the west,” Queen Ahnil said. “Not to mention the prevalence of their attempts to breach our walls.”

“Understood. I’ll make preparations to depart in two days’ time.” Theailys rubbed his eyes and stifled a yawn. “If there is nothing else…”

The queen obliged him with a nod. “You are free to retire.”

Theailys touched his right hand to his left shoulder in the formal salute and withdrew.

Footsteps trailed behind him, soft against the stone floor. “Feeling all right, brother?”

Theailys slowed to walk in step with Searyn. “Relatively speaking. It was only one corpse this time.”

“A good day then.” Searyn pushed a loose strand of auburn hair behind her ear. “You aren’t tired.”

“No.” There was no point in lying, Searyn could read him like a book. “Just distracted. Three years to the day. Three years since…” Theailys tensed his jaw. Even after all this time he still had difficulty saying his wife’s name. Part of it was grief, but most of it was guilt. He swallowed the lump in his throat and allowed a ragged sigh to escape his lips.

Searyn offered a sad smiled and squeezed his arm. “Do you want to talk about it?”

“Not really,” Theailys said. “If I do it’ll be impossible for me to focus. But…”

Searyn raised an eyebrow. “But…?”

“Sometimes I think myself a fool to have embarked on such an undertaking,” Theailys said. “History has not been kind where The Keepers’ Wrath is concerned. Have you heard of Anasharon Anor?” Searyn shook her head. “She was Faro Fatego’s wife, and in his quest to forge this weapon he accidentally reaped her soul, same as I did to Anayela.”

“Perdition,” Searyn murmured. “That’s awful.”

“War is awful,” Theailys said, shoving his hands into his pockets. “But you know that more than most…” The question sat on the tip of his tongue. In all the months since Searyn had returned there was one thing they’d yet to speak at length about. “What was it like running your blade through that monster?”

“Awful,” Searyn said. She offered nothing more and Theailys knew better than to press, especially at such a thing as this. “Are you heading off to sleep?”

“Not yet,” Theailys said. “The burial grounds.”

“I’ll take my leave.” Searyn kissed him on the cheek. “Try not to linger longer than you need.”


Presently Theailys withdrew into the cold night, starting south for the burial mounds. They were swathed in thick mist by the time he arrived, analogous of the pressure in his chest. Privy to this parallel, Faro roused from slumber with a shriek. Theailys offered nothing in response. The past three years had numbed him to the sound.

Mmm. Fun,” Faro hissed as he took shape to Theailys’ right. “Smells like fun here with the dead, my Flesh. Have you come to kiss your Anayela’s corpse?

Theailys rubbed his thumb against his index finger. A wisp of illum bloomed to light his way along the path. Faro snarled as they continued on. His abhorrence for Theailys’ use of   illum, minimal as it was these days, was perhaps as strong as Helveden’s fear of Theailys’ ability to wield mirkúr. The power of betrayers and demons, the people said. The weapon of Te Mirkvahíl.

A face from nightmare memory flashed across Theailys’ mind. He clenched his teeth. Maybe they were right. He wiped his nose on his sleeve.

You see, Flesh? Light makes you weak. You could be stronger if you snuffed it out, silenced it like night does the sun.” Faro grabbed Theailys’ hand. “Let me show you. Let me help you feel while you’re awake.

Theailys yanked his hand out of the shadow’s grasp. Not. Here. Keepers, anywhere but here! He refused to let this darkness take control where corpses slept. Where Anayela’s body lay at rest. He’d already let the mirkúr take her soul—the best that he could now was to keep it from tasting her dead flesh.

Are you sure? Not just this once?” Faro pled, stroking Theailys’ face and arms. “I could ease your suffering with just a thread, a string of smoke to make her rise—

Stop.Theailys’ fingertips were cold; the mirkúr was aroused.

“—and you could hold her in your arms, my Flesh.

Theailys gnashed his teeth together as the world spun into obscurity. Please!

Dance beneath the starlight like you used to do.

Before you reaped her soul.

raven landed on the branch of an oak tree. Itbore no leavesand its bark was the color of old ash. Theailys held his arm out and the raven came to him.It cocked its head, its beady eyes unmoving.

“Varésh,” Theailys said, acknowledging the creature by its name. He stroked its head, the feathers soft, if not a bit oily. “The world sits in your eyes.”

The raven’s eyes fluctuated cyclically from black to white.

“The darkness and the light,” Theailys said. “You have seen it all.”

Varésh squawked.

Theailys chuckled. “Why fly so far? What do you hope to find?”

Varésh clucked, flapping his wings.

Theailys sighed. “If you must. What do you make of dreams, old friend?”

Varésh hopped along Theailys’ arm untilhe rested on his shoulder. He snapped his beak at a measured pace.

Theailys nodded. “I see. Is this always so? Is there always an ounce of truth to things we dream or is this simply your opinion, bird?”

Varésh clucked, taking flight. He landed on a tree branch, then bird and brancherupted into flames. Theailys simply stared. He took a seat in the grass and watched the oak tree turn to ash. From the ruin arose a slender silhouette. Theailys eyed the faceless shape, unmoving as he too caught fire and burned to ash, his remnants scattering in the wind.

Starlight twinkled into being. Theailys jolted upward from the dirt, a scream caught in his throat, subdued only by his need to gulp the wet air. He trembled as the silhouette persisted in his thoughts, leering with her eyeless stare, taunting wordlessly just as she had done every week for the past three years. A monument to Theailys’ failure.

He retched—a near certainty after a blackout—then scanned the area for remains. Keepers only knew what Faro had made him do. He saw nothing, but his heart thumped wildly when he realized Anayela’s burial mound stood several feet from where he knelt. He pushed himself to his feet, knees knocking together, and approached. His stomach dropped, and urine dripped down his legs.

Mirkúr tendrils clung to shards of broken earth. Where once his wife had lain was now a vacant tomb.

Anayela’s corpse was gone.

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luke tarzian

Fantasy Author. Long Doggo Enthusiast. Snoot Booper. Shouter of Profanities. Drinker of Whiskey. These are all titles. I’m the Khaleesi nobody wanted and the one they certainly didn’t deserve, but here we are.

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